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Thursday, December 24, 2009

the kiss... (I)

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he stared at her pale and calm face for a short time... then he kissed her long and passionately...
'at last!', he whispered into her ear...
he had a faint smile on his sad face as he pushed the coffin into the sea...

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5 comments:

  1. thanks again timmy for inviting me to this site... lots of things to learn here...
    :)

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  2. thanks hb,
    glad you could make it

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  3. So provocative I can hardly stand it: you're sure this is part I?
    I'm off the check out the next two.

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  4. Kathleen...

    it's the first version...
    :)
    thanks for reading and the feedback...

    love and peace

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  5. Great text you wrote here dear human, I love to be able to read you again. And also thanks for letting me know this interesting place.

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