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Friday, November 19, 2010

oxygenation index calculator...

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words won't do
deaf ears can't hear you

images won't do
blind eyes can't see you

don't even reach out to touch them
frozen hearts can't feel you

they just collect dead fish
floating on the surface of the dark filthy aquarium

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/nooshin azadi/
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5 comments:

  1. Francis ScudellariNovember 19, 2010 at 9:06 AM

    Such a strong and chilling image.

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  2. Peter GreeneNovember 20, 2010 at 9:05 AM

    I liked that, quite a bit. Thanks, human being.
    PG

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  3. human beingNovember 20, 2010 at 11:43 AM

    thank you dear poet friends, Francis and Old 333... for reading and leaving encouraging comments...

    crows can't sing but love to be heard!
    :)

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  4. Jesse.s.mitchellNovember 21, 2010 at 8:26 AM

    I do like this as well. very nice

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  5. human beingNovember 23, 2010 at 10:16 PM

    thanks a lot Jessse... crows appreciate the presence of writers like you...

    namaste!

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