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Saturday, December 25, 2010

the analytical geometry of a relation...

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she
stands
on
my
shoulders
to
(be)
see(n)

shesitsbetweenmeandmyfriendsto(be)love(d)

me
minus my height minus my friends
am still me

she
plus my height plus my friends
is not even she

.
at

4 comments:

  1. Dan LeoDecember 25, 2010 at 11:20 AM

    I love poems where every word counts and where there aren't any words that don't count. Like this one.

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  2. Francis ScudellariDecember 25, 2010 at 2:00 PM

    reconciling these contradictions of she, we find a me (and an us)

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  3. Mariana SofferDecember 26, 2010 at 10:28 AM

    Human being, I am so happy I could find you, I wanted to wish you the best for this time of the year, but also ask you if you could invite me to see your new blog.
    Thanks a lot
    M

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  4. human beingJanuary 11, 2011 at 11:36 PM

    dear Dan Leo...
    these words from you, master of words, mean a lot to crow!

    Francis...
    all is one... yep!
    but this particular 'she' really hates 'me'... just because i love 'us'...
    :)

    Mariana...
    glad to see you here... i've got no new blogs... i simply shut down my blog...
    i may write there again... don't know...
    thanks for your intetest...


    and so sorry dear friends for such a late answer!

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