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Friday, January 28, 2011

a trinity...

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one was present
one was absent
one was just dormant

one was killing 
one was dying
one was just watching

one was ignorant
one was innocent
one still works in a restaurant

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6 comments:

  1. Peter GreeneJanuary 28, 2011 at 9:20 AM

    mmmm....restaraunt....

    This one makes me want to go and listen to Cake, of all things. Thanks for the poem, human being!

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  2. human beingJanuary 28, 2011 at 9:46 AM

    thank YOU, dear Old Peter...

    cake is such a sweet name for a band... i found a bit of information about them and their style on wikipedia... now i should find a way to listen to them ...
    :)

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 28, 2011 at 3:03 PM

    Whoa,...sometimes you are just so... WOW. When I got to the last line, I gasped. This cuts through like lightning so many layers of my understanding right down to my soul SHAZAM.

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  4. timmyJanuary 28, 2011 at 6:22 PM

    nothing to add
    nothing to subtract
    perfect

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  5. Francis ScudellariJanuary 28, 2011 at 9:07 PM

    I could spend a long time trying to interpret this, but I think I'll just savor the ambiguity instead.

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  6. human beingJanuary 29, 2011 at 1:42 AM

    isn't crow so fortunate to have these beautiful souls here to listen to her harsh croaks?

    Kelly... crow is soaring to hear that... as her mission is to disturb! :D

    timmy... so it should be multiplied, dear teacher, eh? :)

    Francis... we see better when things get vague... no? :)

    love to you all

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